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All the night the bottle whispers...

"You are no longer loved by them.
You are no longer wanted here.
Come with me, my darling,
to a painless world void of fear.

Come. Come. Hurry now.
It's not like anyone will miss you.
Your solemn hardened pretty face,
or heart of despised virtues.

Why hold on to this reality?
The one where you don't belong?
Abused, insulted, abandoned.
Does this give you pleasure?
How sick. How wrong.

How you must hate it here, my love.
Every day a struggle for breath,
every day a fight for reason,
or else to plummet to your death.

But now, I offer you so much more.
I offer a world void of nightmares,
a blessed realm of sweet dreams,
a blissful sanctuary void of cares.

So come with me, sweet darling.
Accept my proposal, my love.
Pop off my lid and empty.
Seal our marriage in blood."
©2009 *Sitara-Amira
:iconsitara-amira:

Author's Comments

Prescription bottles full of pain medication like to whisper sometimes.

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:icondeathtosanity:
This is the creepiest thing I've read in awhile. Wonderfully written, not too many things have that kinda effect on me.

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Judge me now
Used to be afraid to let it show
Bow down
A king in my own mind
Every thing's in place
So much brighter from today
:iconsitara-amira:
Thanks :aww:

And Thank you so much for the favorite :huggle:
:icontchiichobits:
Nicely done, though kinda sad in some sort...q-q..., but that makes it good too, it fits^^

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I want to find a person only for me...
:iconsitara-amira:
Thanks :hug: Thank you for the favorite as well :aww:
:icontchiichobits:
no problem at all^^

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I want to find a person only for me...
:iconflare-knight:
It's nicely written

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Time is a major factor in your destiny and fate. When you decide to do something and how you use your time will affect your success or downfall.
Use time to your advantage or it will be your destruction.
:iconmalficeus:
Reading that reminded me of a monologue from older books. Awesome and deep

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Signed Catch me when
you can
Mishter Lusk
:icondeathtosanity:
You're very welcome. :tighthug:

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Judge me now
Used to be afraid to let it show
Bow down
A king in my own mind
Every thing's in place
So much brighter from today

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